If you thought the first one was bad this is worse, I’ll wonder if it will be considered RS homework :/ It is the Hindu om sign in the middle if you’re wondering. It is only ultra rough.
Take a look at traditional Indian henna designs somewhere on the internet. (If this is a henna design like the first one was..) The traditional symbols (vines, paisleys, dots, flowers, leaves, mandalas) have a lot of meaning behind them and if you are going for an Indian style henna, which is evident by the Om, it will help you out a lot! I don’t think this one is worse than the first one- it has a lot more flow to it, which is really important. Keep it up! Also- There are many other cultures that use henna traditionally besides just India, so you may have fun studying others as well.
